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BlazingOx2089



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PostSubject: INACTIVE - Ace B. Daniel   Mon Aug 06, 2012 8:55 am

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Name: Ace B. Daniel
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Hometown: Celadon City, Kanto.
Aim In Life: To challenge every Elite 4 in each region.


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Name: Patchy
Gender: Male
Ability: Immunity
Nature: Naughty
Characteristic: Quick Tempered
Distinctive Features: Wears an eye-patch on his right eye, lost eye to a fight.

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Name: Zeus
Gender: Male
Ability: Static
Nature: Lonely
Characteristic: Alert To Sounds
Distinctive Features: Loves to wear blue sun glasses.

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Name: Jenny
Gender: Female
Ability: Flame Body
Nature: Adamant
Characteristic: Loves To Eat
Distinctive Features: Is faster and has sharper teeth than most Growlithe.


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PostSubject: Re: INACTIVE - Ace B. Daniel   Mon Aug 06, 2012 9:37 am

Very nice, but there are some changes needed. Nothing terrible though, just some details Smile

1. Your last name is different in the title and the description Very Happy
2. "Highly dangerous" and "Really shy" aren't Characteristics. You might want to check [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.].

Other than that, it's really promising Smile
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PostSubject: Re: INACTIVE - Ace B. Daniel   Mon Aug 06, 2012 9:42 am

I agree with Neuro... other than that Welcome to the team!
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PostSubject: RE: Ace B. Daniel   Mon Aug 06, 2012 9:47 am

Ok I have fixed all the errors hope its okay now afro
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PostSubject: Re: INACTIVE - Ace B. Daniel   Mon Aug 06, 2012 9:57 am

Yup, everything's cool Smile I'm locking the topic and put the finishing touch on your post. As soon as you see the pictures, you may post Smile
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